Formative Feedback : During this week, I had to speak with Vanessa about my current game development and concept. In exchange, she directed me on what to focus on moving forward:

• learning more art styles (learning different shading techniques such as cell shading)
• Area/s you are doing well – started to populate the blog, started to think about the logic of the narrative and endings.
• What could be improved – add things to the blog. Do more work; refine major and minor focuses.
• Major : Story -> Focus onto the story the narrative design -> branching more ideas (logic)
• Minor : Developing current characters further – either by redoing the current character colour or
• How to improve – just add missing links to blog, check other’s work, do a development journal on the character design and how to improve these skills, add more research and more iterations and tests on the narrative design