After listening to the advice I was given, I made this map design more vague so it can be arranged in a way that makes the story flow better:

All the parts that look like clouds are meant to be forest area, this acts as a barrier for the players
After listening to the advice I was given, I made this map design more vague so it can be arranged in a way that makes the story flow better:
All the parts that look like clouds are meant to be forest area, this acts as a barrier for the players