After some self-reflection and asking peers about this design, I had decided on a few things that must be changed for the final design.

• Firstly, This design felt too clunky for a character who would be exploring a large map and area
• There wasn’t enough potential for colour in order for it it to be a convincing toy for a young boy
• Severe lack in variety for the material of the armour, it was either under garments or steel plating
• It’s silhouette was too simple and uninteresting, good characters always have distinct features.

NOTE: I couldn’t find the finished original design with finished line art and colour