Crit Feedback
Following formative feedback week, a crit presentation was scheduled to get the opinions of our peers to add to our tutors previous feedback. Crit feedback will be helpful to me as I am still having a creative block for certain core elements like mechanics and narrative for my game. I missed the deadline to create a pitch deck for my game so far as I was severely ill, so I instead used my one page GDD from the week before to aid my pitch to the class.
For each presentation, time was allocated after the pitch to ask any unanswered questions to the presenter and we wrote down our opinions in responses to two given questions on a flashcard:
What did you like? Is there anything missing?
Speech Overview

I started my speech by pitching what I had within my GDD and expanding it by linking examples to some ideas as I didn’t have anything visual to present. As I didn’t have much to pitch to people, it ended up becoming a discussion to help me let the flow of ideas come out.
Pitch Feedback
